I've thought for a while about ideas for visual poetry after seeing a lot of good ones on here and this is my first attepmt at my own.
Seems to be problems when enlarging so if you can't see it properly then tell me.
Found the image randomly on google n just altered it simply.
Expect more when i find some decent software.
Thank you I was practising a lot at the time on my guitar so that probably explains it. Though luckily this doesn't show my lack of skill on zed instrument :S
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I am the master of my fate - I am the captain of my soul -
Thank you for the kind words
I chose the background as i thought about as I was talking about life why not compare it to a road? With the last stanza it looks ahead, like it does on the road. But it was just a quick idea i got that i whipped up in 10 mins. Nothing special but thank you for the kind words again.
How did you interpret it?
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I am the master of my fate - I am the captain of my soul -
This poem is more, calm and quiet determination, to me. Less about life than silent contemplation, strength.
The sky in the picture is really stormy [I always notice skies first], and gives a more foreboding darker feel to the whole thing, which I don't feel suits the whole 'quiet determination' idea.
Something more calm perhaps? ;D
Of course, this is only how I see it. Every writer has his artistic lisence, no?
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My parachute didn't open, and when my back up failed. Pixie dust prevailed.
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All men who have achieved great things have been great dreamers. - Orison Swett Marden
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I am the master of my fate - I am the captain of my soul -
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I am the master of my fate - I am the captain of my soul -
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All men who have achieved great things have been great dreamers. - Orison Swett Marden
Finally, a poem that actually has meaning AND rhythm to it.
I don't think the picture suits the poem though, or perhaps thats just my interpretation of it.
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Good job though.
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My parachute didn't open, and when my back up failed.
Pixie dust prevailed.
I chose the background as i thought about as I was talking about life why not compare it to a road? With the last stanza it looks ahead, like it does on the road. But it was just a quick idea i got that i whipped up in 10 mins. Nothing special
How did you interpret it?
--
I am the master of my fate - I am the captain of my soul -
The sky in the picture is really stormy [I always notice skies first], and gives a more foreboding darker feel to the whole thing, which I don't feel suits the whole 'quiet determination' idea.
Something more calm perhaps? ;D
Of course, this is only how I see it. Every writer has his artistic lisence, no?
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My parachute didn't open, and when my back up failed.
Pixie dust prevailed.
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